Very well done. I really like how disoriented and toilet sort of rhyme, but more-so just roll off the tongue really well.
I feel like this is part of a continuing saga. Eager to see what awaits for such a character
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@johneyreacko thanks! yeah that one kind of surprised me as well, thats the interesting thing about freewrites, you never know what flow you might get in...
but here's the next part: (3-Part Weekend Freewrite: Just a lil bit of flashbacks (Part 2 - 2/6/2021)