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RE: On The Brink Of Failure, a five minute freewrite

in Freewriters4 days ago (edited)

El hombre hasta cierto punto fue inteligente, en cambio la mujer ya borracha de tanto tomar, quedó en pena y en ridículo, muchas beses eso pasa cuando las personas beben mucho no se dan a respetar. Me gusto mucho tu historia.

The man was intelligent to a certain extent, but the woman, drunk from drinking so much, ended up looking shameful and ridiculous. That often happens when people drink too much; they lose respect for themselves. I really liked your story.