"Un dìa inolvidable".Mi participaciòn en Escritura creativa.

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Hola hivers,hoy participo en un nuevo concurso de la Freewritehouse ,cada semana tenemos la oportunidad de crear una historia partiendo de ciertas instrucciones dadas,para esta semana las claves son: llamada,hamaca rota,estas deben usarse en la redacción de la historia al igual que deben estar presentes por lo menos tres de las siguientes interrogantes: Quièn? ¿Còmo? ¿Què? ¿Por què?.Les dejo el link para que acccedan a mas información y se animen a participar:

Hello hivers,today I am participating in a new contest of the Freewritehouse ,every week we have the opportunity to create a story starting from certain instructions given,for this week the keys are: call,broken hammock,these must be used in the writing of the story as well as at least three of the following questions must be present: Who? How? What? What? Why? I leave you the link to access more information and encourage you to participate:


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El sabado en la mañana Clarisa se levantò muy temprano como de costumbre,levantò a su esposo para que la acompañara a realizar su caminata matutina,ella era una chica muy activa,sin embargo dada la inseguridad de la zona le daba miedo salir sola tan temprano.Mientras se preparaba para salir recibe una llamada de su hermana recordándole que pasarìa por ella ,su esposo y dos pequeños hijos para compartir un rato en una playa cercana,

On Saturday morning Clarisa got up very early as usual,she got her husband up to accompany her on her morning walk,she was a very active girl,however given the insecurity of the area she was afraid to go out alone so early.As she was getting ready to leave she received a call from her sister reminding her that she would pick her up,her husband and two small children to share some time at a nearby beach,


Clarisa casi olvidaba la reunión familiar,había estado tan atareada últimamente que se le había olvidado mencionárselo a su esposo y este ya había hecho planes,Dios ahora si se había complicado,su esposo al salir de la habitación le pregunto ¿quien llamaba tan temprano?,ella le explicó la situación apenada con su esposo.El un poco desconcertado le dijo que no había problemas porque la familia para el era importante,lo demás podía esperar y los niños estarían contentos con el paseo.

Clarisa almost forgot about the family reunion,she had been so busy lately that she had forgotten to mention it to her husband and he had already made plans,God now it had gotten complicated,her husband leaving the room asked her who was calling so early,she explained the situation to her embarrassed husband.He a little puzzled told her that there was no problem because the family was important to him,the rest could wait and the children would be happy with the outing.


Clarisa cambiò sus planes y pensó que podía hacer la caminata en la playa y resultarìa mas agradable,asì que organizò las cosas,recordó las hermosas palmeras y las caritas risueñas de sus hijos al mecerse en la hamaca,regalo de sus padres,empezó a buscarla,porque no podía faltar, para su sorpresa estaba rota,algunas cuerdas se soltaron,ella sòlo pudo suspirar y expresar un ¿Cómo pasò esto? ¿Porque a mi? Si me hubiera acordado antes la hubiera arreglado.

Clarisa changed her plans and thought that she could do the walk on the beach and it would be more pleasant, so she organized things, she remembered the beautiful palm trees and the smiling faces of her children rocking in the hammock, a gift from her parents, she began to look for it, because she could not miss it, to her surprise it was broken, some strings came loose, she could only sigh and express a How did this happen? Why me? If I had remembered before I would have fixed it.


Su esposo al entrar a la habitación y verla afligida,preguntò :¿Què sucede mi amor? Ella sòlo mirò la hamaca con tristeza,cuando el esposo la viò, le dijo que no se preocupara pues era fácil de arreglar ,es mas podría hacerlo en la playa,lo que efectivamente pasò,Clarisa pasò un dìa feliz en compañía de su familia,sin imaginarse que ese sería el último en familia,pues su esposo fue diagnòsticado de cáncer poco tiempo despuès,cuando se dieron cuenta ya estaba en etapa terminal y tristemente murió ,aun conserva las fotos de su esposo e hijos,sonrientes meciéndose en la hamaca rota disfrutando de ese inolvidable dìa.

When her husband entered the room and saw her distressed, he asked her: "What's wrong, my love? She only looked at the hammock with sadness, when her husband saw her, he told her not to worry because it was easy to fix, in fact she could do it on the beach, which indeed happened, Clarisa spent a happy day in the company of her family, without imagining that this would be the last one with her family, She was diagnosed with cancer shortly after, when they realized it was already in the terminal stage and sadly died, she still keeps the photos of her husband and children, smiling, rocking in the broken hammock enjoying that unforgettable day.


Espero que hayan disfrutado de esta historia ,gracias a Freewritehouse,un abrazo para todos y nos vemos en el camino.Las imágenes son cortesía de Pixabay.Imagen de despedida de mi autorìa elaborada en Power Point con imagen de Bitmojo.Utilizè traductor DepL.com

I hope you enjoyed this story, thanks to Freewritehouse, hugs to all and see you on the road.images courtesy of Pixabay.farewell image of my author made in Power Point with Bitmojo image.I used DepL.com translator
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