5 minute freewrite Wednesday and Thursday prompts succumbs and yoga stretches

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This is my post for #freewriters Wednesday prompt succumbs and Thursday prompt yoga stretches hosted by @mariannewest

succumbs
They first appeared in his dreams, beautiful women who said they could give him everything he desired. In return, he had to give one of them his soul. My soul, he said, just what am I getting for it? The succumbs told him of all the things that they could do not for him, but to him. He was rich he did not need money, but he craved to have someone love him. His mind was filled with lust, it was too powerful for him to deny. He knew it was wrong and he would for sure end up in Hell, but this is just a dream so what could it hurt?

As soon as he chose one and gave his soul to her she appeared before him, not in dream form but as a woman, she was everything he imagined a woman to be, and now he will be the envy of all of his friends. He was now not only rich but felt powerful in ways he never could have imagined.

That night she took him to bed, she did things to him and took him places that he never knew that he could be taken to. It was the best sex he had ever had. To have this anytime he wanted it made him excited at just the thought of her. To him, it was worth his soul, he did not feel any different other than the lust that he felt. The sex lasted all night, time after time, he did not know that he had it in him but, he did.

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He woke the next morning, thinking of the night before and the power he had felt and thought it had to have been a dream. He rolled over and felt her laying beside him, his excitement started to "grow", he reached for her and felt her rough dirty skin, she was a carrot root. What had he done? He prayed for forgiveness and the Lord saw his weakness as being human, forgave him, and returned his soul, this one and only time.
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yoga stretches
The Lord sent all of the succumbs back to Hell. The one that seduced this man was now doing yoga stretches with the Devil. She was to keep her carrot root form and could never be a beautiful woman again.

As for the man, he gave all of his money to the poor and started a nonprofit to help men deal with their lustful feelings. He told them of his experience and how the Lord forgave him, he gave them the hope that they needed to take the first step in healing.

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You are a POWERFUL storyteller ... and compassionate ... this was an amazing story!

Coming from such an amazing writer as you are, your words mean a lot to me, thank you.