Prompt Fiction Freewritehouse - Suramadu Bridge Becomes a Silent Witness

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What do I see in the Picture Above?

I saw a bridge crossing between islands

What do I feel from the Picture above?

I feel like a journey between islands. Where the bridge is the link between the two islands to travel, do business, or trade goods.

In this post, I will write a fictional story as my participation in the "A Picture is Worth A Thousand Words" contest. This fictional story is an action genre filled with suspense. Check out the story below;



Java Island and Madura Island are located in the Indian Ocean. The two islands are connected by the Suramadu Bridge, which is the only route for communication and trade between the two islands. However, the bridge bears witness to the feud between the two gangsters that rule on each island. The first geng is led by Jhon Key, a criminal known for his cruelty and manipulation. He controlled all illegal activities on Madura Island and used the Suramadu Bridge to ship methamphetamine and weapons to Java Island. Meanwhile, on the island of Java, a gangster led by Hercules is trying to combat John Key's influence and bring justice back to their island.

"Listen to me, friends! John Key has gone too far, they are continuously supplying heroin on this island so that it is hampering our business" said Hercules

"Then what do we do boss?" Asked Hendro, who was a member of Hercules.

"We have to stop their car when crossing the Suramadu bridge"

"How do we know their car boss?"

"I will send some men to join them as our spies"

"That's a great idea boss"

"You should prepare yourself and wait for my next command"

"Yes, Boss!"

On the other hand, a policeman named Riyadi is given the task of infiltrating the island of Madura to stop illegal trade being carried out through the Suramadu bridge. Riyadi is not an ordinary policeman, he is a martial arts expert and a police strategist, so he has the skills needed to fight these criminal gangsters. Disguised as a member of John Key, Riyadi entered Madura Island. There, he meets Budi, a secret spy from Hercules to stop an illegal business managed by John Key. The two of them agreed to work together and plan an attack on John Key, who was located on the Rongkang beach.

While at the methamphetamine factory. Budi and Riyadi knew that methamphetamine would be shipped to Java via the Suramadu Bridge. Budi contacted Hercules secretly and gave him information about it. Riyadi, who is also a member of the police, also conveyed this information to his leadership. After sharing the important information, Budi and Riyadi went to headquarters, where John Key was hiding. With alacrity, the two of them boarded the car towards Rongkang beach.

"Prepare yourselves and your weapons! John Key's truck carrying methamphetamine will cross the Suramadu bridge, we will stop it!" Hercules shouted to his members.

"Ready boss!" shouted the gang with enthusiasm.

The long-awaited day has arrived. Hercules and the others got ready to stop three trucks loaded with methamphetamine and heroin and kill members of John Key who were going to distribute methamphetamine on the island of Java. Meanwhile, Budi and Riyadi attacked John Key's base on Rongkang Beach. In the middle of the Suramadu bridge, the car of Hercules and his members intercepted a truck loaded with methamphetamine. They will fight John Key's army. Likewise, Budi and Riyadi had arrived at John Key's headquarters. Gunfire ensued at the Suramadu bridge and John Key's headquarters. With their skill and teamwork, they managed to defeat John Key's men one by one. When they entered the main room where John Key was, Budi and Riyadi saw no one. It turned out that John Key had fled in his car to the island of Java. The only access to the island of Java is the Suramadu bridge.

"Damn it, he managed to escape!"

"Calm down Riyadi, I will call my friends and tell them that John Key will arrive at Suramadu Bridge"

"That's great. I hope that bastard gets caught."

When John Key arrived at the Suramadu bridge, he took out his gun from the car. With his prowess, John Key shot members of Hercules. John Key is a former cop who is very skilled at shooting. However, because his actions and behaviour were so bad, he was fired from the police force and became the methamphetamine-trading Mafia. When the bullets used by John Key ran out, he was confused about what to do.

"Hey, Hercules! I challenge you to a one-on-one duel here! Do you dare?" shouted John Key.

Hercules smiled upon hearing that "Sure! I will fight you with my bare hands"

All the gang members fell silent. They will see their boss fight in the middle of the Suramadu bridge. Confident, John Key ran up to Hercules and punched him. But John Key's punch can be parried by Hercules. Seeing that his defences were open, John Key kicked Hercules so that he fell to the ground. Seeing Hercules who was below, this was John Key's chance to attack again, but Hercules was able to dodge and immediately punched John Key in the jaw. John Key fell with a hard punch to the jaw. Hercules quickly jumped up and kicked John Key unconscious.

Seeing that the battle was over, Hercules' members cheered for the defeat of John Key and his members. Shortly thereafter, the police arrived and arrested John Key and his surviving members. The methamphetamine manufacturing factory on the island of Madura was closed and all remaining members were put in prison. Now the islands of Madura and Java are free from methamphetamine and drug use.

The End.

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Drug abuse is a big offense and it's good to hear that it's abusers were finally brought to book

Yes that's correct. Drugs destroy the nation's generation. Thanks for commenting. Regards

Kind of risky if two new members of a gang tell each other who they really are. I wonder how they did it.

Hi, welcome. Don't tell but I am a cop, or?

Thanks for your entry.

they are famous gangsters, surely other gangsters find out about their competitors. Thank you very much sir