I really like it. I myself just started writing a fictional story for Hive. I wish there would be a lot more high-quality fiction on Hive to enjoy for others. And your try definitely wasn't all that bad - or rather: It was pretty good! Let's see, if in the future I might stumble across more of your stories :)
And about the title of the story: "Dinner for two, not three" is actually a quite good title. That is what made me click. If you would have named the post/story "Back to us", I would have most likely not clicked. So good job!
Me too, I'm starting to develop a habit of reading books and short stories ☺️.
Hope so too ✨
Aww, thank you! I thought so too, I'm glad you picked thesame one with me