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RE: Adore

in Freewriters21 days ago

used to love music, but I don’t anymore.
Cause each sol-fa note reminds me of you.
But it’s weird because even in absolute silence, I’m still reminded of you.

Love that tension between absence/presence in this poem. Instead of saying "all the time" you let us know exactly how pervasive thoughts of a person can be..

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Exactly so.
It's been a minute, River.
I'm so glad you enjoyed this.🥰