I felt this...
I felt it build.. and I felt it in my bones when the climax came...
I really want to bid you explore further, but I fear..
For both your minds and ours..
So instead i'll say... don't stop there... or don't, stop there
This was sad, but epic!
P.S. I feel a better title would have been the phrase you used; The Test of Fertility
The test of fertility, why didn't I think of that?
Stories like this opens up a lot of wounds and highlights scars that people want hidden. Next time maybe.
Thank you, Stranger.