You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: The Architect of Dreams.View the full contextakumagai (68)in Blockchain Poets • 4 months ago You used there pictures but the poem doesn't flow for me. But then again i could just be reading it wrong.
You should read the initiative's requirements to understand its objective. Thank you for your comment and careful reading.
My point is about an overarching idea. But again my take on your poem may not have gotten your overall story being told in your poem.
What I wanted to convey is the process of an internal transformation: from the heaviness of routine to liberation through imagination or knowledge.
Hmm i see it now.
Good poem