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RE: Simulacrum: The Garden of Consumption

I liked the way the rhymes contributed to the flow of the piece.

I thought these lines:

Waiting, scrolling, waiting
for the next thing to try,
the next thing that reminds us
we are still alive.

included an insightful contrast, where waiting for the false hope can actually be a barrier to the thing people are looking for.