Good Night Poem

Hello everyone. I feel great to meet this community in hive. I want to show you my last poem, written for a friend. I hope that love it and I appreciate so much the feedback for to keep growing in this big world. The Poetry, Thank You!!!

Good Night
Time's elixir doth melt
and in the crucible is beheld
crystalline foundry
in weary eyes reflecting
the gallant and dusky wind
winnows the holy molecules
of thought.
And they fall,
the droplets of fatigue fall alone
behind the flesh,
it seeps into the bone.
Yet it steals not the radiant smile
of that light,
shining in your eyes.

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 24 days ago  

You've received an upvote from the Blockchain Poets account. Thank you for submitting your poem to our community!

Please also source your image properly @darketonullusm , thanks.

I hope your friend appreciate your poem, is always lovely when somebody dedicates something like this.

Very beautiful poem, how the very night itself can be a great muse for great work like this one is, thanks for sharing it, greetings and welcome ♥