It might have been hard on them to have been betrayed, but then at the end of the struggle lies beauty to wash away their pain. Great poem
It might have been hard on them to have been betrayed, but then at the end of the struggle lies beauty to wash away their pain. Great poem
Interesting. I hadn’t associated betrayal with this poem, but I think I can see what you are pointing out.
Thank you for commenting.
Was the meaning I get from the imagined penned men
I see. You’re right, basically they were betrayed and their trust was violated.
When I wrote this, my intention was more to comment on how we abuse things of importance and beauty, and that because of this, they will willingly disappear from our world.
But I now see where you were coming from more clearly.
There are always a thousand worth to a written poem. But glad to know your actual meaning
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