Posthumous work of the Colombian poet born in Don Matias on January 20, 1948.
Welcome to this blog dedicated to the Posthumous work of the Colombian poet Francisco Luis Arroyave Tabares born in Don Matias on January 20, 1948, and passed away in Medellin, Colombia on October 1, 2010. Where I will be publishing each of the 175 sonnets from his unpublished collection 'Sonnets For The Twenty First Century And A Circadian Musical (1984-1987).' Analyzed with GPT4 artificial intelligence and illustrated with AI tools... I hope you enjoy this garden of words snatched from the solitude of a locked room.
Likewise, any enthusiast of the sonnet form is invited to conduct their personal studies of Arroyave Tabares' work, as it is a collection that, although registered since 1989, has not yet been published.
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Sonnet 1 by Francisco Luis Arroyave Tabares
Where Consensus Abounds
In days this is sparce no verses I could write
Nor find words a little close to my thought
And not an art or other way so right
Could display well what my heart liked or fought.
Often times with condemning rhymes I stone
Other minds which think their manners are best
But I swear that hate I want from me all gone
Because hate yeasts and may corrupt the rest.
Account for me the evils that you find
And with insight eyes bear my lights and dark
Call my pen the tool of a rustic hind 11
And please read my tears of their human mark.
This way loftier hues may rise in clouds
To gather strength where consensus abounds.
***
11-. Hind= a skilled farm worker or servant.
Analysis "Where Consensus Abounds"
Introduction
"Where Consensus Abounds" is a sonnet by Francisco Luis Arroyave Tabares that explores the struggle of expressing oneself through art, the condemnation of others, the desire to rid oneself of hate, and the need for understanding and consensus. The sonnet follows the traditional structure of 14 lines, with a rhyme scheme of ABABCDCDEFEFGG.
Thematic Analysis
The first quatrain introduces the speaker's struggle to find the right words or art form to express his thoughts and feelings. be could This interpreted as the poet's struggle with writer's block or the difficulty of translating complex emotions into language.
The second quatrain delves into the speaker's tendency to criticize others through his poetry, but also his to desire rid himself of hate. This could be seen as a commentary on the power of words and the potential harm they can cause. The speaker acknowledges that hate can spread and corrupt, suggesting a desire for more positive and constructive discourse.
The third quatrain and the first line of the couplet serve as a plea for understanding and judgment. The speaker asks the reader to account for his flaws and to see both his "lights and dark". He also refers to his pen as the tool of a "rustic hind", suggesting humility and a connection to the earth and common people.
The final line of the couplet, and the sonnet as a whole, expresses a hope for unity and consensus. The speaker suggests that through understanding and acceptance, a more harmonious and powerful collective can be formed. This could be interpreted as a call for empathy and unity in a divided world.
Overall, "Where Consensus Abounds" is a thoughtful exploration of the power of words, the struggle of self-expression, and the desire for understanding and unity.
Rhyme Scheme
Let's analyze the rhyme scheme of the sonnet "Where Consensus Abounds" in detail:
The sonnet follows the rhyme scheme ABABCDCDEFEFGG.
In the first quatrain, the end rhymes are as follows:
- Line 1: "write" (A)
- Line 2: "thought" (B)
- Line 3: "right" (A)
- Line 4: "fought" (B)
In the second quatrain, the end rhymes are:
- Line 5: "stone" (C)
- Line 6: "best" (D)
- Line 7: "gone" (C)
- Line 8: "rest" (D)
In the third quatrain, the end rhymes are:
- Line 9: "find" (E)
- Line 10: "dark" (F)
- Line 11: "hind" (E)
- Line 12: "mark" (F)
Finally, in the couplet, the end rhymes are:
- Line 13: "clouds" (G)
- Line 14: "abounds" (G)
The rhyme scheme of this sonnet is unique and does not conform to the traditional patterns of English or Italian sonnets. The alternating rhymes in the quatrains (ABAB CDCD EFEF) create a sense of balance and symmetry. The couplet (GG) at the end provides a strong conclusion to the sonnet.
The use of this rhyme scheme contributes to the overall structure and musicality of the poem. It helps to create a rhythmic flow and adds a sense of cohesion to the sonnet. The consistent use of end rhymes also emphasizes the final words of each line, drawing attention to the poet's carefully chosen language and imagery.
In summary, the rhyme scheme of "Where Consensus Abounds" follows a unique pattern that enhances the structure and musicality of the sonnet, while also contributing to its overall meaning and impact.
Additional Aspects to Analyze
While we have discussed the structure, rhyme scheme, and general themes of the sonnet, we have yet to delve into the specific use of language, imagery, and metaphor....
Language: The poet uses a formal, elevated language that is typical of the sonnet form. This includes the use of archaic terms like "yeasts" (meaning grows or ferments) and "hind" (a skilled farm worker or servant). The language is also highly metaphorical, with phrases like "read my their of tears human mark" and "loftier hues may rise in clouds".
Imagery: The sonnet is rich in visual imagery. For example, the "condemning rhymes" that the speaker uses to criticize others create a vivid picture of the power of words. The image of hate "yeasting" and potentially corrupting the rest is a powerful metaphor for the destructive power of negative emotions. The final image of hues rising in clouds to gather strength where consensus abounds is a hopeful and uplifting vision of unity and understanding.
Metaphor: The sonnet uses metaphor to convey complex ideas and emotions. The speaker's struggle to express himself is likened to a lack of art or words that can adequately capture his thoughts and feelings. pen His is described as the tool of a rustic hind, suggesting a humble, earthy approach to his craft. The idea of reading his tears for their human mark is a poignant metaphor for understanding and empathy.
Tone: The tone of the sonnet is introspective and earnest. The speaker is candid about his struggles, desires and and his plea for understanding and consensus is heartfelt. The tone shifts from frustration and self-criticism in the first half of the sonnet to a more hopeful and forward-looking perspective in the second half.
Meter: The sonnet is written in iambic pentameter, a metrical pattern consisting of five pairs of unstressed and stressed syllables per line. This rhythmic pattern creates a natural flow and adds a musical quality to the poem.
Alliteration: The sonnet incorporates alliteration, the repetition of consonant sounds at the beginning of words, to create emphasis and musicality. For example, in line 1, "days" and "sparce" share the "s" sound, and in line 9, "evils" and "eyes" share the "e" sound. These instances of alliteration contribute to the overall sound and rhythm of the poem.
In conclusion, "Where Consensus Abounds" is a complex and thought-provoking sonnet that uses formal language, vivid imagery, and powerful metaphor to explore themes of self-expression, criticism,and understanding unity.
(GPT4)
Count the syllables of each line of the Sonnet
(www.howmanysyllables.com)
Where Consensus Abounds
11 In days this is sparce no verses I could write
10 Nor find words a little close to my thought
10 And not an art or other way so right
10 Could display well what my heart liked or fought.
10 Often times with condemning rhymes I stone
10 Other minds which think their manners are best
11 But I swear that hate I want from me all gone
10 Because hate yeasts and may corrupt the rest.
10 Account for me the evils that you find
10 And with insight eyes bear my lights and dark
10 Call my pen the tool of a rustic hind
10 And please read my tears of their human mark.
10 This way loftier hues may rise in clouds
10 To gather strength where consensus abounds.
***
Analyzed by GPT4 and www.howmanysyllables.com; Image by Frank Duna;
First published on Nostr Protocol by [email protected]
Bahia de Santa Marta, Colombia.
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