Great haiku. It captures the image of those wind storms that pop up during Spring. I like how the last lines say, "her rage!" Who's rage is the poem referring to? The lady or the spring wind?
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Great haiku. It captures the image of those wind storms that pop up during Spring. I like how the last lines say, "her rage!" Who's rage is the poem referring to? The lady or the spring wind?
I assume the lady, but assigning the rage to the wind would be an interesting interpretation!