poet reading the weather
as a metaphor
repeated diction
in rhyme phrases
read all signs
signs in the universe
poet reading the weather
sunshine
cloudy cloud
raindrops
from time to time
as poetry
written over and over
Indonesia, January 18, 2022
poetry and digital painting by @penyaircyber
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# ## Membaca Cuaca
penyair membaca cuaca
sebagai metafora
diksi diksi berulang
dalam frasa sajak
bacalah segala pertanda
tanda tanda di alam semesta
penyair membaca cuaca
cerah matahari
mendung awan
derai hujan
dari waktu ke waktu
sebagai puisi
dituliskan berulang kali
Indonesia, 18 Januari 2022
puisi dan lukisan digital oleh @penyaircyber
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Beautiful painting, first of all. I was so curious where you would go with such an image. I love the idea of weather as poetry, and your structure invites us to pause and consider each small element, the way we would need to in order to see the poetry in a cloud or a raindrop.
Thank you for the review.
All in universe become poetry that be read everyday. The poets write their feeling or thinking about it.
Very meaningful and relatable poem. I often draw inspiration from nature and things around. There's a poem on my blog-Smiley moon. You might wanna check it out. Thanks.
Really nice poem again
Thank you, my friend
You're very much welcome
I like how it gets at the poetry experience in such a minimal way. Nice job!
Thank you
I really like this poem is very short but beautiful, I love the image, very original, greetings ☺