Poem: Touring your paradise (Recorriendo tu paraiso) [EN/ES]

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English

Touring your paradise

I would become Dante,
to discover your valley,
where passions burn
and illusions are armed.

To run through its gentle waters
like a river along its path,
exact as bow and spear,
to travel without whereabouts.

I want to burn in your circles
that each one makes his footprints,
building our bonds,
and become nights of stars.

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Español

Recorriendo tu paraiso

Me convertiría en Dante,
para descubrir tu valle,
donde se queman pasiones
y se arman las ilusiones.

Recorrer sus aguas mansas
cual río por su sendero,
exacto cual arco y lanza,
recorrer sin paradero.

Quiero, arder en tus círculos
que cada uno haga sus huellas,
construyendo nuestros vínculos,
y se hagan noches de estrellas.

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_{Sources of the cover image Source 1 Source 2 Edited by Rincón Poético.}

Text authored by:
Yenny Aldazora
DRA

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[ifarmgirl-leo]

This is great and it sounds like an adventure!

I was so intrigued that I shared my random thoughts on LeoThreads and invited you there too :) Hope you check it out and let's have some fun conversation. Thank you and see you 😉

[litguru]

Excellent poem that works well in both Spanish and English. It has a similar rhythm in both languages, though the Spanish one is more passionate

Quiero, arder en tus círculos
que cada uno haga sus huellas,
construyendo nuestros vínculos,
y se hagan noches de estrellas.

Muy caliente!

[joseitosanchezs]

Muy lindo poema, me encanto mucho ese juego de rimas que utilizaste para esta obra de mucho romance y amor, muy hermoso, gracias por compartir ♥