Your poem has captured a beautiful awakening. I particularly liked your last line, “lucid flakes of golden light” is especially evocative, painting a picture of sunlight’s delicate, shimmering touch.
Your poem has captured a beautiful awakening. I particularly liked your last line, “lucid flakes of golden light” is especially evocative, painting a picture of sunlight’s delicate, shimmering touch.
Thank you! It's a fun challenge trying to convey imagery and emotion with words.