Shored up memories...
Released untamed.
Bubbles clinging,
At the water's edge.
Lingering...
Sparkling in the twilight.
.
One by One...
They always burst.
.
Toes scrunched,
Heels taking flight.
I test the waters.
Ebb.
Flow.
Ebb.
Flow.
The cold allure
Distracts.
Then...
Flailing,
I Fall.
Effervescent
turbulence.
Salty.
Crushing.
I lose myself in the spray.
Which way is up?
Which way is down?
I don't know anymore.
Do I panic,
or surrender?
Fight,
Or ride the wave?
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Very nice poem, in the sea everything is tastier, I always love walking between the border of the sea and the sand when I'm at the beach, it's something relaxing, regards ♥
isn't it just? 💖 The cold wet sand squishing between the toes, like meditation for the feet lol, whilst the waters lap at your feet and waves crash in the background.
Nice rhythm! I like the syncopes that come so naturally and yet fill in the senses in your poetry.
They must come naturally, for I just write😊. I do tidy afterward but I like to write in a way that mirrors not just my thoughts but the way in which they are forming too, and if I can align that with imagery that paints the picture at the same time, I do ;-) (I had to look up syncope in the dictionary; that's a new word for me🙏)
That's great when you ''just write'' 🙂 lol, I also like your sincerity. Best! 🙏
Hi, @samsmith1971, nice to meet you here! It's been a while since I've posted or read on Blockchain Poets, and today I come across a bunch of great poems. I really liked the sound of your poem, and the atmosphere you are gradually creating. I think it's going to take me a long time to get the sound of "ebb flow ebb flow" out of my head!
Thank you my friend @agreste... we can credit another Hiver for putting those words into my head in the first place a few weeks back. She knows who she is ;-) As you can see, they hang around a good while, but eventually we give them new life ourselves❣️ I haven't written poetry in a while but when the urge takes me and guides me, I write. I do read quite a bit of poetry on Hive, so perhaps if the energy is flowing today in that sphere, I should go and check them out. Thank you for the tip🙏
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Great rythm, you have the perfect mix of words. Thanks for this wonderful piece
I'm glad you enjoyed it @martinlazizi . thank you for taking the time to stop and read it 🙏
Singing it in my head. It bounces and sparkles with
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Wonderful poem with a great rhythm. What I like about the rhythm is that it's very see-sawing like the waves. So I almost feel like I'm floating in the rhythmic waves of the verses.
Simply wonderful 🥰🥰. You did justice to words
Thank you 🙏
Starting my day with this one, it's apt for the heavy winds blowing a gale outside against the roof. Feeling similar lately, although it's the quieter waves against the shore from where I'm sitting. Introspection indeedy.
That's all I've got LOL.
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Thank you for taking the time to give a considered read of my poetic thoughts @jin-out. My inspiration? A milieu of life's touchpoints for me this past week, more lows than highs, a friend's post, processing past memories, broken trust, and this:
Somedays people, places, things challenge us to a point almost beyond our capabilities to endure. They provoke an unearthing of long-buried memories ...and deep introspection. I find poetry a catharsis.
I'm riding the wave...🙏
You are kind, thank you. I'll be ok. It's a bit gloomier here near London but I'll be out on the school run shortly getting some fresh air and I'm taking your advice and going for a walk down by the Thames. I've been flying... loving life lately so this mood and these solitudinous thoughts caught me somewhat unaware. Yeah, the weather doesn't help this time of the year. Adds an extra layer to the melancholy. You have to just resolve to go with the flow and ride out the wave. Thank you for sharing your post and taoist inspirational thoughts with me, my friend. Spring is just around the corner for both of us now. I hope you are feeling much better today yourself🙏💗