I know this pain is for a while
It's this hope that had made us strong
The crooked path of life is where fun lies
On the same path tears are build
We've walked all our lives in a path filled with mysteries
And pain in our bones
My bones hurt, but giving up is never bargained
On this path of pain had our ancestors trail
On this path they conquered pain with hope
Life had thrown me a hard brick,
On them I had built myself a wall
A wall so high that pain could no longer reach
And a wall strong that critics have no effect
Let me build for myself an empire
In which its dweller are victors who once had
Pains in their bones
Excellent verses that you bring us. A surreal pain painted between shelves of emotions and smiles of hypocritical fantasy.
Thanks for sharing.
Good day.
Thank You for reading through and for the kind comment
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The poem speaks much, we've held up to hope amidst pain and this had been our strength to remain strong in pain.
Nice poem
Yeah, it has always been our hold to strength
The poem captures the resilience of the human spirit in the face of adversity. Despite the pain and hardships that life throws our way, we find strength in hope and determination to build a better future for ourselves and those around us. The poem's message of perseverance and overcoming challenges is both inspiring and empowering.
This was beautifully written
Yeah, rightly stated, it captures the need to endure hardship amidst pain