Although you say that they are loose poems, there is a line of life that unites them and leaves moments of reflection of those daily experiences that leave small traces, like when you expected to receive something in return and received nothing. I didn't see that darkness you mentioned. Thanks for sharing.
That’s good to hear that you don’t pick up on the darkness. Perhaps it’s just me, reacting to certain lines and the way they connect to different memories and observations.
Thank you for commenting. 😊