Peach Blossoms

takeonrules (47)in Blockchain Poets • 3 years ago

Blossoms promising
Such sweetness come midsummer
Hold crisp frost at bay

3 years ago in Blockchain Poets by takeonrules (47)

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moeknows (64) 3 years ago

I enjoyed this piece. You did a great job of putting the reader in the moment and allowing us to see and feel the season. Great write.

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takeonrules (47) 3 years ago

Thanks! I'm finding these haiku are great reminders of those moments.

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schreib.hamster (51) 3 years ago

It has a nice rhythm to it.. if it only were true as well ;)

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