I think I prefer the tercet; gives me a deeper feeling of reading a poem due to the outlook. Either way, the meaning was properly expressed.
I might just try the Japanese Haiku Mono-stitch thingy.
Thank you for sharing
I think I prefer the tercet; gives me a deeper feeling of reading a poem due to the outlook. Either way, the meaning was properly expressed.
I might just try the Japanese Haiku Mono-stitch thingy.
Thank you for sharing
I can’t quite get away from the tercet either. It just feels right. But the moon-stich is a fun experiment. Give it a try.