Thank you for the tour. I think the phone post works really well to give a sense of immediacy. I felt like a tourist as I read. Great pictures. Also, effective direct narrative. You saved the best for last: the goat!
Thank you for the tour. I think the phone post works really well to give a sense of immediacy. I felt like a tourist as I read. Great pictures. Also, effective direct narrative. You saved the best for last: the goat!
Direct narrative is my style, don't know any other way. :) Thank you for the compliment!