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RE: LeoThread 2025-12-09 01-24

in LeoFinance2 days ago

Part 7/12:

Poor Pacing and Narrative Flow

Pacing is a significant flaw in the series. Episodes tend to drag, packed with unimportant exposition, or rush through critical moments, leaving little room for character development. The inconsistent pacing destroys momentum, turning what could have been an inspiring story into a chaotic viewing experience.

A better-balanced approach might have involved weaving action sequences with quieter character moments, maintaining engagement throughout. An episodic structure building toward a meaningful climax, with each scene contributing to either storyline or emotional depth, would have substantially improved narrative flow.

Underdeveloped Villains and Expectations Unmet