It looks like you didn't do too bad. You got better as you went. There were a couple errors right at the beginning, but you shook them off! I can't write on my phone either. I use Ecency for commenting late at night, but in terms of writing a full post, I just can't do it!
There are likely many people who can write well on the phone, but even then, I think that they still shortcut on the communication. Shorter isn't better, if it doesn't make an impact.
I should use Ecency more - hardly ever use it.
It's quite handy for doing that quick late night check on your account. I feel like something like 80% of the world accesses the Internet via a smartphone, so those of us with computers are definitely in the minority.
Does that make you wonder what kinds of people are in that general split? I would suspect computer users are likely older and more experienced in work and life. I have noted here that the best content creators on Hive, aren't that young.
I think it has to do with where you live too. I am guessing that most computer users are in first world countries and population wise, we are pretty small.