Hey, this is my first entry into inkwell community, I hope enjoy it. Expect more from me @adaopara thank you. ENJOY.
Sands filled the box and some of it were littered on the tabletop, little creatures were visible through the glassbox on the table. They walked forming a linear line, each not breaking the shape. He watched with his eyes full of passion, occasionally he would tap the glass to monitor the movements of the ants in the box. They all sthattered around due to the stranger noise and they would occasionally jam their heads together to communicate for each of them to run away. He was facinated by their attensiveness and their jointed sense of togetherness. The ants all followed there line to the huge ant hill just ahead where they kept their food and fed their queen, that was the mother of all of them in the cave.
This was awesome!!! It reminded me of a movie called Honey I Shrunk The Kids. Have you ever seen it?
I hope Andrew takes good care of those ants!
Welcome to the Ink Well community, @adaopara. It seems from your story that you are well equipped to offer us narratives with imagination and drama. This story takes us to an uncommon place. Ants, and lasers and boys who undergo a transformation. You you have devised a clever way for the boys to overcome their antagonism.
You certainly do describe the setting in detail. The ant colony is fascinating. And the blossoming--the story prompt--is handled very well.
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It's a story that really kept me reading and stayed until the end. Thanks for sharing