You are viewing a single comment's thread from:

RE: That moment when I thought I lost you

in The Ink Well • 3 years ago

Hello @pipokur67,
Thank you for posting this clever story in the InkWell community. You pulled a very believable 'switch' on the reader. In the beginning, we assume one point of view when we meet the husband--as the doctor does--and then we realize our error. You lead us to this realization skillfully. Well done!

3 years ago in The Ink Well by
$0.00
    Reply 2
    Sort:  
  • Trending
    • [-]
     3 years ago  

    Thanks @agmoore, for your comment, it is of great value to me.

    [-]
     3 years ago  

    🌟 🌟

    $0.00
      Reply