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RE: The ink well fiction weekly prompt #3: Beauty with a twist - That Reflection in Your Eyes

in The Ink Well • 5 years ago

Hello @pipokur67,
You are a master of mood and scene. There is so much beauty in your story--not just the beauty of the scenery, but the beauty of two strangers sharing a moment. The beauty of love, lost and anticipated. Through the narrator's description of love lost, we gain a glimpse of the elderly gentleman's love imagined.

Such good writing :)

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    Thank you very much @agmoore, for reading my story, it is an honor to receive such wonderful comments. Thank you, it encourages me to keep writing

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      🌟 🌟

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