Hello @emeka,
I love the way your story begins. The first paragraph pulls us in.
There is a magical kingdom which has existed since the dawn of time called Enchantia, it was located far away and it constituted of Elves, faires and all manner of magical creatures.
That is a perfect paragraph. After reading that, I was ready for enchantment :)
The lesson Santa taught is one we all have to remember, I think. We have to show tolerance, and forgiveness. After all, isn't that what we want people to show us?
A lovely Christmas story.
Thank you so much for reading