Hello @bruno-kema,
What a wonderfully logical mind you have. You work out the details so that the escapade works like a perfectly calibrated clock. The relationship between Sophia and Duke is fleshed out in a very short time. They are compatible professionally, and temperamentally.
The mechanism of a countdown works well. It helps to build tension, although never did I doubt for a moment that this skilled pair would pull off their mission successfully.
A really good story. Bravo, @bruno-kema.
Edit:
I think there is a typo in one sentence:
in mirrors from too to bottom.
Also, forgot to mention what a really good application of the prompt this is.
Hello @agmoore, thank you very much for this comment. It was the only one i could think of that would go with the prompt.
And the relationship is between Sophia and Samson, not Duke.
Thank you very much for reading dear friend, i am glad you enjoyed it.
I couldn't remember their names when I was drafting the comment. (Names are harder to remember when you're older😇 That's one thing my husband and I agree on.) I glanced back at the story to refresh my memory and picked up the wrong name .
What's important is that they know who they are😇.
Sorry....
Very correct😁
Thank you once again.
🍀🍂