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RE: War Bicycle / Bicicleta de Guerra

in The Ink Well5 months ago

This tells me that as cold as his heart was, he still had some good in him

Only cartoon cutouts are without complexity. Pol Pot had a daughter, whom he loved. Hitler was reportedly fond of his dog. Your commander's moment of joy makes him human, and relatable.

I think the story was wonderfully balanced. I do expect you to live up to that standard in the future 😄 But you are also complex, so write what pleases you and hope for a great outcome.

I'm rooting for you!