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RE: Battered Bones, the plight of a celestial desk worker

in The Ink Well β€’ 2 years ago

Past the grit and grime that clogged the ears of the Keeper of Time, the plea of Bruce broke though "My wish is to undo every wish that has ever been made!"

Now that's a hook πŸ˜‡

I love the way you work the prompt into your story. I love your story. It's a pleasure to read your work.

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Thank you for stopping by and commenting @agmoore! I'm glad my hook drew you in! πŸ˜ŽπŸ˜„