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RE: Seagull’s Heart

in The Ink Well2 years ago

He was a man’s man.

Great twist on a familiar phrase. You bring the story around nicely, from the beginning where you tell us the problem, through the middle where you explain how it came to be, to end with that smashing line.

A lot of symbolic language without the tear jerking. Nicely done, @itsostylish