Thank you my friend, @litguru. You are an astute reader and a skilled writer. Your positive estimation of my brief story really makes me feel good.
You are right. I turned the cliche around. That cliche drives me crazy :))
I believe in forgiveness, but, come on....
I do love your hook. Very clever.
Have a great one. Looking for a story from you :)
Yea, I think it's easy to fall into clichés. I do it all the time and feel bad afterwards, but sometimes a man's gotta do what a man's gotta do. :)
It's here somewhere, I just need to find it. ;)
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