What a wonderful interpretation! Making the characters into aliens. You surprise us and change the perspective completely. Plus, the humorous aspect is entertaining.
As for the dialogue: you very successfully give clues,such as
she denies her roots just to look good as human beings
and
just to ingratiate herself with human beings, what a shame on our race
However, the second line:
"I don't know who Tapic, there is anger, friend, I can't distinguish it !."
is a little confusing. It's hard to tell who is angry.
All in all though, an entertaining and well-done exercise!
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