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RE: You Are Not My Brother

in The Ink Well4 years ago

Will it annoy you if I tell you I expected this ending as soon as Will was attacked by the stranger? Your description of the scene is like a ballet, wonderfully choreographed, and the resolution is a satisfying finale.

Why do we read? (Why do I read?). Passing time? No. There's not enough of that. It's to gain insight, to get to know the author, and to think for a moment about something outside my immediate sphere of experience. Sometimes, I don't want to know the author (often). In this case it's a pleasure.

Keep writing.

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Of course not, I'm very honored, especially knowing that you imagine the scene to be like a dance (ballet). That's even new to me. Constructive comments like that make people feel happy and smile, as well as the desire to keep learning. Thank you for the support.