Hello @mrnightmare.net,
I know you won't mind if I laugh. I love the way you camped up this 'love' story. This is the funniest thing I've read in a long time. Even the narrator knows it's funny. The narrator is serious, and at the same time acknowledges the absurdity of everything that happens.
You are experimenting in your writing. Bravo. In writing there really is complete freedom. Most authors don't realize that, but you did here. Keep experimenting. It makes for fun reading.
Hahaha, I don't mind if you'll laugh because to tell you the truth, that was on my mind. I was laughing at how their encounter happened. I just kept on twisting the situation so that it would be surprising. lol
Thanks, you liked it.
I think it is wonderful that you are changing form. For me, personally, writing is fun. I wouldn't do it otherwise. You are having fun, experimenting. That's how you grow as a writer. Good going :))
yeah, I'm enjoying it, and this piece was the first time that I wrote it longer and even paused. Well, it's nice if you take your time while writing after all.