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RE: Fiction: The game/ El juego (ENG/ ESP)

in The Ink Well3 months ago

That last line...It's almost as though you wrote that whole story knowing exactly what the last line would be.

It's interesting that as I read, I agreed with Santa, and yet the last line suggests that maybe she should have been more forthcoming.

It's a great story, and I'm still glad Santa held herself in check. There are many Lenchos in the world, and many women who regret being beguiled by the easy smile.

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I agree with you. Unfortunately, there are many destinies that are inherited and very few people who manage to change their destiny. Thank you for your comment. I loved your story. Regards