I love science fiction. In my youth I gobbled up the science fiction classics. So, when I say you do a good job, I have a standard to measure your writing by.Hello @ricardo993,
You create your scenes, your other worlds, with fastidious attention to detail. It's obvious that you do research. Makes the stories credible to a science fiction fan. I did crave an ending, though. I realize the story got long and you had to stop, but perhaps you could have worked in a suggested resolution of some kind. Just an idea :)
I did enjoy reading this.
Yes, I thought of many ways to finish the story. But I didn't find any, it's just that the story is about five thousand words long and I didn't know if I should publish it all. So I cut it to that point that seemed congruent.
It is a gift to have such an imagination that thoughts insist upon pouring out. More fun for you and the reader :)