Nice to see you living up to my expectations :) You use symbolism, metaphor effortlessly (well, maybe it took a lot of effort, but you made it look effortless). Lagos. Reminds me of some period pieces I read in the past about New York...the city would eat you up if you were not strong. But if you were strong, you could soar. Nowadays, I don't think anyone can write about New York like that. The city seems more like a predator than an opportunity.
You see...you got me thinking.
Great writing.
While writing this story, I broke into a sweat now and then.😂 It was a bit hectic trying to make a place seem like a human. But, I'm glad I'm writing better and i'm glad you saw this story as great writing. Thanks for your comment. It's very encouraging and supportive.🤍