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RE: The battle for earth

in The Ink Welllast year

Nice job, @trexane. An intriguing, intelligent story. I didn't see any 'holes'. That is, you show how each challenge is met. For example: How did Justin get to the spaceship? You tell us. He used the same pathway the minions used to come out.

Entertaining and well structured fiction.

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Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked and enjoyed my story