I like how the story gradually unravels with each line, you seem to have mastered that part in a way and I will be looking forward to learning from you.
Nice story, keep up the good work.
I like how the story gradually unravels with each line, you seem to have mastered that part in a way and I will be looking forward to learning from you.
Nice story, keep up the good work.
Thank you, I'm flattered by your words since I noticed you write well.
Thank you by the way for how you understood the story.