Hi @marysenpai, I enjoyed your story! However, your afternote at the end is a little confusing. I'm thinking that JJ is a female, but your words indicate he's a male?
Still in my head he is still a complementary character, not of the main characters, but he is taking on a life of his own
No, no, she is a woman, in that note I mean that she is a character that I am developing for a bigger story, however she is not in the main character plans, yet. I apologize for the confusion.