Under the orange glow of the evening sun, with the heat at its lowest and the breeze was cool on the skin. Edward put finishing touches to his arrangements and stepped back to admire his work.
"Yeah, right." He nodded.
The carpet grass was sparkling and clean, freshly mowed this morning. It smelled of clean grass and the fragrance of the hibiscus flower by the fence was also in the air. The combination of the two gave a homey atmosphere.
A blanket was spread out neatly over the grass, and stocked hampers were placed at the four corners to keep the blanket in place. He had taken out a bottle of Champagne and it was currently seating in ice.
He checked the time, Tina and Tommy should arrive anytime soon.
"Give me strength to do this, Mary." He muttered, kneeling so he could set out the wine glasses. "I can't do this alone."
Just as he placed the last glass, he heard the heavy footfall behind him. He turned and smiled, "Hello, Tommy."
"Hello, Edward," Tommy replied.
There was an awkward moment of silence, then the two of them hugged.
"It's good to see you again Tommy."
Tommy shrugged, looking around at the setting. He sighed sadly, "you didn't change anything. This is just how she liked it."
"Yes. This is how she likes it. I couldn't bear to change even the slightest detail."
Just then, a nine year old boy ran into view, waving his toy car about. He was closely followed by his mother, "be careful Junior."
She paused as she saw the two men.
And just as with Tommy, Edward was the first to greet, "hello Tina."
"Hi, Edward." She hugged him, then turned to Tommy. "Hello, brother."
"Hi sis," Tommy grinned as he pulled her into a hug.
In the ensuing silence, they listened to the songs of the bird and the whistle of the breeze. Edward handed them glasses and proceeded to pop the champagne.
"Thank you for inviting me, Edward. For inviting us." Tina muttered.
"It brings back so many memories." Tommy concurred.
"Yes, it does." Edward poured out drinks into their glasses and they raised them in toast. "To Mary."
They echoed his toast and clinked glasses.
Mary was Edward's wife and mother to Tina and Tommy. She had them before she had met Edward. Ten years later, she had died suddenly of a terminal illness, shocking everyone. After her death, the family had scattered somewhat. Each to his or her path to life. This went on for three years.
Edward had decided to fix it. And he did this by organizing a picnic. Something he knew for a fact Mary loved. He invited her children, his stepchildren.
"I miss her so much," Tina muttered, wiping a tear.
"I know," Edward replied, putting his arms around her shoulders. "So do we."
"We should have done this sooner," Tommy said, his hands deep in his pockets after finishing his drink.
"I know, son. But we're here now. What are we gonna do?"
Tommy smiled then, "I suggest we eat."
With laughter, they settled down for the sumptuous meal. In memory of the wife and mother that had been lost.
The End
This story is in response to this week's prompt Prompt do well to try it out.
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Beautiful, sad story, @bruno-kema. And a wonderful take on the prompt. Your setting is so perfectly described. You take us there with all the sights and sounds of a picnic on a beautiful day.
By the way, our curie connection was broken for a day or so, and as we explained in the weekly highlights newsletter (which features this story), some posts did not get the rewards they deserve, and this was one of them. It is fixed now, but unfortunately there isn't a way to fix the curie vote. Sorry about that!
This story is bittersweet, @bruno-kema. But a picnic in memoriam is a perfect way for the family to come together and begin to heal from grief. In the end there is a feeling of hope, that they can begin to reclaim their happiness.
A sad story, but at the same time filled with new hope. Well done :) May Edward finally have a chance to heal.
Somewhere a departed soul saw her loved ones on earth.
It's a nice occasion as is just and beautiful the justified sadness of such a profound loss.
Thanks for posting the story, @bruno-kema
How tragic, but how nice that the memory of a person brings them back together. Sometimes it happens in families, they break up until they never see each other again.
Oh, this was so moving ... a beautiful tribute ... the awkwardness, the grief, the determination to push through ... the honor, the respect, the continuation of love, and memories ... well done.
Wow. This is beautifully written. You are a fantastic writer, @bruno-kema.
The emotions of a family who dearly missed one of their own are vividly portrayed in this story. Nicely done. 🙂