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RE: The Ink Well Prompt #14: Railroad / The train's last wagon

in The Ink Well3 years ago

Gaia's life is just a simple routine, and she was enjoying it like that. Then other factors began interfering and the routine was gone.
This is a beautiful story, one of love and normalcy. It rings of realism. A pity Andres doesn't get the girl after all that work he put in.
But sometimes, life is just like that.
Good work @gracielaacevedo, i'm happy i read your story.