Haunting!
Reminds me of victims or torture, rape, and child abuse, those who say they detach from their body and whatever happens, it's "not me," it's "only the body," and while an awareness of pain continues, this detachment somehow keeps the person alive. You nail it!
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Thanks. I had some weird ideas, so I wanted to try a story like this. Thanks again for the kind words and support.