THE LAKE MONSTER

[coolxxx]

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[theinkwell]

Kudos for the pictures. Just wonderful. The story, also, is delightful. There are translation issues, but the sense of the story shines through (particularly with the aid of those pictures).

If you look back at the first paragraph, you will see that you have attached a Spanish sentence to the beginning of the story. You might want to remove that, or move it.

You turn the monster into a docile pet through an act of kindness. Thank you for posting this story in the Ink Well community.

[agmoore]

I loved your pictures, and I enjoyed your story.

[bruno-kema]

A beautiful story. And captivating pictures.
Keep it up @coolxxx 👍🏽

[gracielaacevedo]

Hello, @coolxxx ! A lovely story with a lovely character with the same name as you. What a happy coincidence!
I became, by the magic of colours, a child reader.
Now that I write to you, how I wish you would rework it to make it a little slower (so that the children can assimilate the actions given) at the moment of the understanding between the fisherman and the monster. Even if it's a dream, it's a nice dream worth enjoying more, because it illustrates how different people can understand each other.

Thank you for this beautiful story!

[jayna]

This story is so much fun, @coolxxx. You take us on a thrilling little fishing journey, and tell a story within a story. I love how you added that extra layer, that the monster is just a dream, but then it really exists... right behind our little pumpkin-headed fisherman. Do you write for children?

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