I am confused about why Seth is in jail. Has he accidentally killed his child with a drug overdose? Is he a hit man, and what does this have to do with his prison sentence? I don't understand the relationship between Clinton and Seth..
The story line is not linear. While it is a valid technique to use flashback, the thread with the present should be maintained so the reader does not get lost. Is there a way you can see to clearing up several areas of confusion?
I am confused about why Seth is in jail. Has he accidentally killed his child with a drug overdose? Is he a hit man, and what does this have to do with his prison sentence? I don't understand the relationship between Clinton and Seth..
The story line is not linear. While it is a valid technique to use flashback, the thread with the present should be maintained so the reader does not get lost. Is there a way you can see to clearing up several areas of confusion?
Thank you.