You did a good job with this story, @cryptofi. You establish the problem faced by Leo right away. This is a classic conflict. He needs money for his exam, and then he finds a wallet that could give him the money. But, he chooses another path. He returns the money and is rewarded richly for deciding on this path instead of on a path that would lead him to thievery.
You have character development, conflict and conflict resolution!
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Leo ... a man with lion-sized character and nobility receives a lion's share of a reward ... this is an unusual but rewarding way to handle a prompt about cats! I loved it!
Patience they say is key🌡️, leo was patient with this whole situation, despite fast approaching final exams. It's hard to find people like that in the society.
Leo did a very good deed! It's a good moral - to do the right thing and be rewarded for it, vs. resorting to a crime or misdeed to get what you want. While these kinds of things may not happen much in real life, it makes for good fiction. Thanks for posting your original fiction in The Ink Well. :-)
You did a good job with this story, @cryptofi. You establish the problem faced by Leo right away. This is a classic conflict. He needs money for his exam, and then he finds a wallet that could give him the money. But, he chooses another path. He returns the money and is rewarded richly for deciding on this path instead of on a path that would lead him to thievery.
You have character development, conflict and conflict resolution!
Thank you for posting this story in the Ink Well community. Please be sure to read the work of other writers in the community and share comments with them. We are urging everyone who posts in The Ink Well to take this step, going forward, to ensure our community members are supporting one another. (We also have this in The Ink Well community rules on our home page and in our weekly writing prompts.) Thank you!
Leo ... a man with lion-sized character and nobility receives a lion's share of a reward ... this is an unusual but rewarding way to handle a prompt about cats! I loved it!
Patience they say is key🌡️, leo was patient with this whole situation, despite fast approaching final exams. It's hard to find people like that in the society.
Thanks for sharing ❤️
Leo did a very good deed! It's a good moral - to do the right thing and be rewarded for it, vs. resorting to a crime or misdeed to get what you want. While these kinds of things may not happen much in real life, it makes for good fiction. Thanks for posting your original fiction in The Ink Well. :-)