A nice, creative twist that brings about a change in the group of boys.
It's so rewarding to be able to put yourself in the other's shoes.
I liked your story @cryptofi
There is a saying: Seeing something with new eyes. In this case, that is quite literally true. And, it is also figuratively true. The little boy sees things for the first time, and the older children see his peculiar behavior with 'new eyes'. You take the concept of perception and give it dimension in this story, @cryptofi.
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The sense of sight is one we take for granted. This story is a great reminder that it's an incredible gift. I love how the boys develop compassion when they understand the reason for the young rider's exuberance about the passing scenery.
A nice, creative twist that brings about a change in the group of boys.
It's so rewarding to be able to put yourself in the other's shoes.
I liked your story @cryptofi
There is a saying: Seeing something with new eyes. In this case, that is quite literally true. And, it is also figuratively true. The little boy sees things for the first time, and the older children see his peculiar behavior with 'new eyes'. You take the concept of perception and give it dimension in this story, @cryptofi.
Thank you for posting the story in the Ink Well community. Please be sure to read the work of other writers in the community and share comments with them. We are urging everyone who posts in The Ink Well to take this step, going forward, to ensure our community members are supporting one another. (We also have this in The Ink Well community rules on our home page and in our weekly writing prompts.) Thank you!
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The sense of sight is one we take for granted. This story is a great reminder that it's an incredible gift. I love how the boys develop compassion when they understand the reason for the young rider's exuberance about the passing scenery.